Thursday, May 5, 2011

pi

Expert Shows weeks of work
 Audience is very interested
 I've done the work myself Research in my words – with my personality in it
 Contains humour(?)
 Interaction with the audience Speech is confident, clear and with action and expression

Practititioner
 Shows three or four weeks of work
 Information is interesting and in my own words
 Adults have supported me without doing work for me
 Some humour (?)
 Some interaction with the audience
 Audience is attentive and interested
 Speech is clear

Apprentice
Shows about a week’s work
 A little information – some in my own words
 Adults have done some of the work for me
 No interaction with the audience
 No humour
 Poor presentation
 Few pictures
Mostly reads the info from the presentation

Novice
 Reads the words on the presentation
Clearly started at the last minute
 Hardly any info
 Parents have done a lot of it for me
 No pictures or steps
 Copied straight off the internet
 No humour
 Not finished on time
 Untidy presentation
 Speech is not very clear
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15 comments:

  1. CamrynMay 5, 2011 at 5:41 PM

    Nice topic jas. I personaly loved the skatepark. Maybe you c ould have faced the audience a bit more.
    From Camryn

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  2. aidan's eportfolioMay 5, 2011 at 5:41 PM

    good work but you need to tallk clearer but you chose a good topic

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  3. Tyler KupaMay 5, 2011 at 5:41 PM

    Nice work Jason I would like to play on it ever day
    From Ty Ty and Alfie

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  4. sophie's 2010eportfolioMay 5, 2011 at 5:42 PM

    Good job jason you chose a great topic because you knew a lot about it but next time you could look more at the audience but apart from that good job.
    Sophie,Sara Ana

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  5. Maddi ChrystalMay 5, 2011 at 5:43 PM

    Good work Jase, you spoke clearly and well, I liked the skate park & pool and you informed us about lots of things.
    Next time have somethink written down or key works because it sounded that saying ramdom things off the top of your head!
    -Maddi & Hannah :)

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  6. caitlinMay 5, 2011 at 5:43 PM

    Great PI Jason! I like the way you made things that other people want not what YOU want.

    I think you should look at the audience more but other than that it was amazing no FANTASTIC!

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  7. CameronMay 5, 2011 at 5:44 PM

    it was a cool pi and me and thor loved it so much
    it was a rocking pi jason

    from thor and cam

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  8. josh`s e-folioMay 5, 2011 at 5:44 PM

    great pi with the colosal skate park just speak a little slower

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  9. saulMay 5, 2011 at 5:44 PM

    I like the house you made can I have one just next time tell me more about your PI but other then that nice work. I learnt how to use google skech.

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  10. JaimeMay 5, 2011 at 5:45 PM

    Great Pi

    I liked the way you picked the topic.

    Next time involve people by letting them have turns.

    Jaime and Alana

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  11. aidanMay 5, 2011 at 5:45 PM

    cool pi it is relay cool and iv never seen Google sketch up.

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  12. annaleiseMay 5, 2011 at 5:46 PM

    that was cool what you could do i'm going when I get home

    next time invole more people

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  13. AnonymousMay 5, 2011 at 5:46 PM

    I think that was a great PI. I like the way you involved the audience by letting Chaz have a go and by asking kids their opinions. You could tell the audience was really interested. You spoke really clearly and confidently. You are an excellent presenter. I had to keep reminding you to face the audience. You could have had the netbook in front of you so you didn't need to turn away to look at the screen. Otherwise - GREAT!

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  14. Tyler KupaMay 5, 2011 at 5:47 PM

    please speak more clearly and face the audince more but apart from that it was good
    ty luke

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  15. Sean ScottMay 5, 2011 at 5:47 PM

    great PI jas honestly I dont think you need to improve on anything, my fav part is that you can make anything and theres no limit!

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